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Pretty good...

Pros: Good idea. I started laughing after the second ad, and the ending was pretty neat. I think you used the idea pretty well. The movement of the characters was also realistic a lot of the time.

Cons: Some of the animation needs work, like when the guys rubs his chin or the lady first comes up the stairs. In fact, the animation seems to get better as we progress through the movie.
The sound effects weren't the best, but that wasn't much of a problem.

Overall: 9/10 for pros and 7/10 for cons. Average = 8/10. Keep the animating up.

BigTippi responds:

Well thanks for the comment, and also pointing out the pros to the animation. I knew the chin rub and the stairs were not the best, but i also ran out of time and couldn't do a 3rd run through on those parts.

Thanks for laughing at the jokes, it is kinda funny that you started laughing at the same point that most other people did that, I showed this to, before I submitted it.

Nice...

There are a lot of sprite animations out there - and a lot of them aren't very good. However, this is one the best I've seen so far - I think it's got a good feel for movement and it's mostly smoothly done.
I just wish all the others were more like this.

Good job and keep it up.

SXR123 responds:

Thanks a lot! glad you like it

Cool!

That's actually pretty good...

NanoSoft responds:

Thank you!

Well...

There wasn't heaps of animation, and when there was it wasn't great. I know that you know that the art isn't very good, but because of that I couldn't really understand what was going on.

Senmetsu responds:

I'm glad you noticed the animation, it was kinda shit :(

I loved my art and understand it, but of course I understand it, its my art.

Part of me wants to fix this story up with more understandable art, but most of me wants to think of this as a truly artistic endeavor :) This means something to me, and even if people don't see it, I see it.

But I know what to fix next time :3

Thanks for your comment :)

Well,

This started off quite well - i thought the first fight was very well done. But after that it didn't flow as much. I think this was because there were two many gaps between moves, and the battles started to just consist of characters taking turns attacking eachother. Also, there wasn't much of a story.

Oh, and add some sounds!

vanimorf responds:

Thanks for the comment

but i guess it stopped after the fist fight because i didnt really have anything in mind to put in it and i didnt have any internet when i was doing this so i couldnt add anything extra like sounds.

Also later in the year i will make another animation that will be better than this and have sounds

Yeah..

The animation and art was good enough, but it doesn't make much sense (mostly because of the voices), and is much too short.

TheRealNat23 responds:

Agreed.

Well...

I waited for something to happen, but nothing ever did.

I guess that's the point.

kodiakclock responds:

good for you :)

Yep.

Pretty friggen awesome.

Kwing responds:

Thanks!

Um.

Hm.

Yeah.

quitestupid responds:

"Hm.

Yeah."

Well...

I'm not a great animator myself, so I can't be too critical. But I'll give a few suggestions. Firstly, animation wise it wasn't too bad. The first animation didn't have much character movement, but it didn't need too. The second needed a faster frame rate. Yours didn't have much movement either, but from what I saw it was pretty well animated.

Collabs always has to have a theme, and these seemed to be tied together by 'WTF'? Because many animations could fit into this category, the collab doesn't really seem to flow.

Well, those are my comments. Hopefully they're helpful. 5/10 and 2/5.

raremasta responds:

u're right and thanks :P

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