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MrTroodon

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Yes!

When I read that it was stop-motion, I thought it was going to be another noob make liitle clay balls roll around. But this awesome! Even the ending was great.

Well...

There wasn't heaps of animation, and when there was it wasn't great. I know that you know that the art isn't very good, but because of that I couldn't really understand what was going on.

Senmetsu responds:

I'm glad you noticed the animation, it was kinda shit :(

I loved my art and understand it, but of course I understand it, its my art.

Part of me wants to fix this story up with more understandable art, but most of me wants to think of this as a truly artistic endeavor :) This means something to me, and even if people don't see it, I see it.

But I know what to fix next time :3

Thanks for your comment :)

Not bad!

Sure, the voices aren't the best, but i laughed when he said that penguins have gills.

Oh, and I was disappointed when it ended so quickly. It the intro was too long for such a short animation. It needs to be longer!

Keep it up.

So...

Drawing and voice acting is pretty good, there's not heaps of animation but it's pretty faultless. The joke was kind of weird, and it really needed a punchline of some sort, because it was a whole lot funny. Keep it up. (4/10 for plot and 7/10 for everything else, round off to six)

Well...

It's neat and and kind of hypnotic. All the animation is good, except for maybe the tree, which when it sways is not very realistic, but the art is great. It just needs some sound effects to complete it.

Nice

But it BADLY needed a punchline of some sort.

Well...

The animation is pretty good, and I like the idea. However, the only reason I really got the joke was because I read the description before hand. I know you realize it's short, but I'm just saying you could of expanded it a bit. Maybe put some close-ups of her face to show how she doesn't care, maybe she walks past a dying friend and doesn't help. But other than that, it's great. 3/5 and 7/10.

Well,

Most of the animation is pretty good, but some movements aren't, such as the door opening. As for the concept, a parachute fail isn't the most original and funny idea, but seemed to work fine.

Oh, and it needs a play button.

Well,

This started off quite well - i thought the first fight was very well done. But after that it didn't flow as much. I think this was because there were two many gaps between moves, and the battles started to just consist of characters taking turns attacking eachother. Also, there wasn't much of a story.

Oh, and add some sounds!

vanimorf responds:

Thanks for the comment

but i guess it stopped after the fist fight because i didnt really have anything in mind to put in it and i didnt have any internet when i was doing this so i couldnt add anything extra like sounds.

Also later in the year i will make another animation that will be better than this and have sounds

Yeah..

The animation and art was good enough, but it doesn't make much sense (mostly because of the voices), and is much too short.

TheRealNat23 responds:

Agreed.

None of your business.

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